Thursday, December 16, 2010

Draft #2

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 Once upon a time there was a girl named Ashiebah. Ashiebah was a 9 years old muslim girl. She was quiet and didn’t talk to many people, she loves to read and doesn’t like to speak outloud.  Ashiebah went to a public elementary school. Ashiebah didn’t have many friends in her school, but she never got teased. Until one day……
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 Ashiebah was sitting down reading when these two girls Jamie and Samantha were introduced to her class. As Ashiebah was reading her book the two girls came to her and said "Why do you wear that yucky thing on your head?!" Ashiebah just stood quiet then they laughed and walked away.
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The next day, Ashiebah arrived at school when all of a sudden she gets a water balloon thrown at her head. Ashiebah turned around crying. She seen the same two new girls Jamie and Samantha. Ashiebah turned back around and ran straight to the bathroom. Ashiebah hid in the bathroom all day. She was afraid that if she came back out everyone would start to tease her.
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 Then at the end of the day she finally came out for recess. She sat down all the way in the corner and read her book. Then she noticed Jamie and Samantha  coming over to her. When they got to her they just stood there looking at her. Asheibah looked up slowly and the two girls started laughing and pointing at her.
 "What an ugly scarf!"said Jamie to Samantha
 Asheibah started to cry.
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 "Hey LEAVE HER ALONE!" shouted a tiny voice.
 Jamie and Samantha turned around and they saw Alex. Alex is also a girl in Ashiebah’s class. Alex is independent and likes to read. But she isn’t afraid to speak outloud or stand up for herself
"That isn’t funny at all, Ashiebah is wearing that scarf because it’s her religion!" "Who do you guys think you are to be making fun of her ?!"
Then Ashiebah stood up and said,
" Yea i have to wear this because i am not allowed to show my hair to boys, its against my religion." "Can you please stop ... it really hurts my feelings." Jamie and Samantha were shocked to hear Ashiebah say something to them. Then Alex walked next to Ashiebah and told her,
"Don’t worry I don’t think you look weird , I think you look pretty and i actually like your scarf." Then Alex took Ashiebah’s hand and they walked away.

                                                                                                                                The End

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